The draft version of S. A Elbereth Gilthoniel, appearing on RS/394. The version here includes the draft of Sam’s invocation of Elbereth (WR/218), whose first three lines are nearly identical to the lines appearing on RS/394, and whose 4th line resembles that of 4th line of the later version of the invocation. It has no translation, and is sufficiently different from the later version of the poem that it is quite difficult to analyze.
Noldorin
el
noun. star
eledûn
place name. Eledûn
elbereth gilthoniel (draft)
Elbereth Gilthoniel (draft)
elwe
masculine name. Elwe
elbereth
masculine name. Elbereth
elboron
masculine name. Elboron
eledhwen
feminine name. Elf-maid
ellonel
feminine name. Ellonel
elbereth gilthoniel
Elbereth Gilthoniel
elennor
place name. *Elf-land
eledh
noun. Star-folk, Elf
eldûn
masculine name. *West-star
ell
noun. sky
An element meaning “sky” in several names from The Etymologies of the 1930s: N. Elfaron “Sky-hunter” (Ety/SPAR) and N. Elthoron “Eagle of the Sky” (Ety/THOR). It was derived from the root ᴹ√ƷEL “sky” which had an Old Noldorin form: ON. elle (Ety/ƷEL). However, Tolkien said “In Noldorin and Telerin this is confused with EL star”, implying that the word was not used in modern language; an earlier but rejected version of this entry had archaic N. †ell, el “sky” (EtyAC/ƷEL).
Neo-Sindarin: Despite the above statements, ell is probably the best attested option for “sky” in Neo-Sindarin, and I would use it as such, since it is in fact distinct from S. êl “star”, a word that is itself archaic/poetic versus more common S. gil.
elrûn
masculine name. *East-star
elivorn
place name. Lake-Black
elethon
masculine name. Ælfwine
elfaron
proper name. Sky-hunter
elthoron
masculine name. Eagle of the Sky
elanor
noun. sun-star
elbereth
feminine name. Queen of Stars, (lit.) Star Queen
elf
noun. friend
elrond
masculine name. Starry-dome, Sky
elros
masculine name. Star-foam
elw
adjective. (pale) blue
elwing
feminine name. Star-spray
elianw
noun. rainbow, (lit.) sky-bridge
elw
adjective. (pale) blue
edhel
noun. Elf
helcharaes
place name. Helcharaes
Noldorin equivalent to ᴹQ. Helkarakse appearing in The Etymologies from the 1930s (Ety/KARAK). It is most likely a combination of helch “bitter cold” and a mutated form of caraes “jagged hedge of spikes”, the latter attested only in this name. It was first written as (rejected) elcharaes, and also appeared in the variant from Helcharach (EtyAC/KARAK).
edhel
noun. firstborn, eldest
beleriand
place name. Beleriand
oelinuial
place name. Pools of Twilight
Earlier name of S. Aelin-uial in The Etymologies from the 1930s (Ety/AY) appearing along with variants Elinuial (Ety/KHIS, MBOTH, MUY) and Lhîn Uial (Ety/MUY). All these names contain uial “twilight” as well as a word for “pools”, either the plural of oel or (plural?) lhîn. In the narratives of this period, however, the name already appeared in its later form Aelin-uial (LR/262).
heltha-
verb. to strip
The form helta- in the Etymologies is a misreading according to VT/46:14
iell
noun. daughter
iell
noun. girl, maid
iell
noun. daughter
mellon
noun. friend
neledh
cardinal. three
gael
adjective. pale, glimmering
meldir
noun. friend
meldis
noun. friend
mellon
noun. friend
neled
cardinal. three
neled
cardinal. three
neledh
cardinal. three
sell
noun. daughter
sell
noun. girl, maid (child)
annabon
noun. elephant
A noun for “elephant” in The Etymologies of the 1930s, a combination of N. ann “long” and N. bon(n) “snouted”, from primitive ᴹ✶andambundā (Ety/MBUD). Its historical development would have produced ✱✱annammonn, but Tolkien said it was with “with dissimal[itive] alter[ation] of medial mb” (EtyAC/MBUD). The similar forms {Andabund >>} Andrabonn for “elephant” appeared in Lord of the Rings drafts of the 1940s.
Conceptual Development: In the Qenya Lexicon of the 1910s, Tolkien gave G. funt as the equivalent of ᴱQ. hunto “elephant” (QL/41).
erion
masculine name. Eldest
Earlier form of S. Iarwain appearing in Lord of the Rings drafts from the 1940s, translated “Eldest” and appearing beside N. Iaur (TI/125). It might be a superlative form of iaur “old”; in the Early Noldorin Grammar, the similar suffix -iant was used for the superlative (PE13/125). If the suffix -ion was a Noldorin superlative suffix, perhaps the initial [e] developed due to Noldorin i-affection.
lhevon
proper name. Elves remaining behind
iaur
masculine name. Eldest
lalf
noun. elm-tree
lalven
noun. elm-tree
lhalorn
noun. elm-tree
penedh
noun. Elf
penn
noun. Elf
andabon
noun. elephant
andabund
noun. elephant
andrabonn
noun. elephant
annabon
noun. elephant
lalf
noun. elm-tree
lalven
noun. elm-tree
lhalorn
noun. elm-tree
lhalwen
noun. elm-tree
lhalwen
noun. elm-tree
sethnoss
proper name. Firstborn, Elves
amath
noun. shield
amath
noun. shield
ambath
noun. shield
golodh
noun. "Deep Elf" or "Gnome", one of the Wise Folk
golodhrim
noun. Deep Elves, Gnomes
mirion
noun. great jewel, Silmaril
mîr
noun. jewel, precious thing, treasure
alchorin
proper name. Not-of-Kôr
Noldorin term for the Elves “Not of Kôr”, equivalent to ᴹQ. Ilkorin, appearing in The Etymologies from the 1930s (Ety/AR², LA). It also appeared in its plural form Elcheryn. This term appears to be a combination of the negative prefix al-, a mutated form of N. Caur (= ᴹQ. Kôr) and a variant of the adjective suffix -en. In some rejected notes from The Etymologies, Tolkien indicated it was derived from OQ. ḷkor- (EtyAC/LA), so perhaps it was an adaptation of the Quenya term rather than an original Noldorin word.
Conceptual Development: In Early Noldorin word lists from the 1920s, rejected cognate of ᴱQ. Ilkorin was Uchor (PE13/155).
bredhil
feminine name. Varda
A Noldorin name for Varda appearing in the earliest Silmarillion drafts from the late 1920s, replacing older G. Bridhil (SM/43). It also appeared in The Etymologies from the 1930s as a derivative of ON. Bradil (Ety/BARÁD), but these names were rejected and possibly replaced by N. Berethil or N. Elbereth (Ety/BARATH).
lhûr
noun. slumber
A noun appearing as N. lhûr “slumber” in The Etymologies of the 1930s, cognate to ᴹQ. lóre, derived from the root ᴹ√LOR “sleep” (EtyAC/LOS). Tolkien deleted this form when he revised the root to ᴹ√LOS.
Conceptual Development: G. lûr “slumber” appeared in the Gnomish Lexicon of the 1910s (GL/55), clearly based on the early root ᴱ√LORO “doze, slumber” (QL/56).
Neo-Sindarin: I’d restore this word as ᴺS. lûr “sleep, slumber”, since I retain the connection between the root √LOR and sleep; see the entry on √(O)LOR for further discussion. Hints of this word can be seen in the pure Sindarin name S. Lothlúrien for Lothlórien “Dream-flower” (PE17/48).
ôl
noun. dream
A noun in The Etymologies of the 1930s glossed “dream” derived from the root ᴹ√OLOS of the same meaning (Ety/LOS, ÓLOS). It replaced a deleted form oll (EtyAC/LOS). It had an abnormal plural form elei “dreams”, derived from primitive olosī, where the intervocalic s was lost resulting in a diphthong. Following Sindarin plural patterns, the result is more likely to be ely “dreams”; see thely < ✱tholosī the (archaic) plural of S. thôl (PE17/188).
Conceptual Development: The Gnomish Lexicon of the 1910s had some similar words: G. oloth or olor “a dream, apparition, vision” and G. olm “a dream” (GL/62), all based on the early root ᴱ√OLO (QL/69).
gilbrennil
feminine name. Varda
gwîn
noun. wine, vine
The wine of Dor-Winion occurs in the Lay of the children of Húrin and a place located either in the "burning South" in the first version, or probably east of the Blue Mountains in the second. Then we have Dorwinion as a meadow-land in Tol Eressëa at the end of the Quenta Silmarillion. It reappears in The Hobbit, and was finally placed North-West of the Sea of Rhûn in the decorated map by Pauline Baynes (see HL/115-117 for discussion). The meaning of this name is unknown and has been largely discussed. What do we have indeed in this "Winion", or rather gwinion since the initial w- must come from lenition? According to Christopher Tolkien, the Lay was begun c. 1918 and was composed during his father's stay at Leeds, a date meaning that the word can be Gnomish, possibly Early Noldorin, or in an indigenous language of Beleriand. In Gnomish and later in Doriathrin and Ilkorin, there is a genitive plural ending -ion which may very well be contained in this word. Then we would segment gwin-ion "of gwin". The context calls for "wine", "vine" or something similar. It can hardly be a coincidence that gwin is precisely the Welsh word for "wine", a loan from the Latin vinum, as the English "wine" itself
ingem
adjective. old (of person, in mortal sense: decripit, suffering from old age)
New word coined by the Elves after meeting with Men
o
preposition. from, of (preposition (as a proclitic) used in either direction, from or to the point of view of the speaker)
According to WJ/366, the preposition "is normally o in all positions, though od appears occasionally before vowels, especially before o-". With a suffixed article, see also uin
bereth
noun. queen
eilian(w)
noun. rainbow, (lit.) sky-bridge
lhûn
adjective. blue
a
conjunction. and
alf
noun. swan
ar
conjunction. and
erchamion
masculine name. One-handed
geil
noun. star
glinn
noun. (pale) blue
gwind
noun. pale blue
lheben
cardinal. five
min
cardinal. one
nimp
adjective. pale
perin
adjective. half
rhîs
noun. queen
thond
noun. friend
tint
noun. spark
tâd
cardinal. two
alag
adjective. rushing, impetuous
alf
noun. swan
aran
noun. king (used of a lord or king of a specified region)
athan
preposition. beyond
bereth
noun. queen, spouse
brûn
adjective. old, that has long endured, or been established, or in use
dúath
noun. darkness, shadow
dúath
noun. nightshade
dúwath
noun. darkness, shadow
dúwath
noun. nightshade
eilian
noun. rainbow
eilianw
noun. rainbow
erchamui
masculine name. One-handed
geil
noun. star, bright spark
gildin
noun. silver spark
giliath
noun. all the host of stars
gwanod
noun. tale, number
hûn
noun. heart (physical)
ial
noun. (?) a call, (?) a cry
ialla-
verb. to call
lheben
cardinal. five
lhoth
noun. flower, inflorescence, a head of small flowers
The noun is collective, a single flower being lotheg
lhothod
noun. (single) flower
lhothod
noun. single flower
lhû
noun. a time, occasion
lhûn
adjective. (unknown meaning)
This word, which also appears on the map of Middle-earth in LotR, is glossed as "blue" in The Etymologies, but Tolkien later rejected this meaning (as luin was already used in that sense). He then proposed several explanations for it, including the possible adaptation of a Dwarvish name into Sindarin, but he apparently never reached a definitive solution.
loer
noun. summer
lothod
noun. (single) flower
maidh
adjective. pale, fallow, fawn
meidh
adjective. pale, fallow, fawn
min
fraction. one (first of a series)
môr
noun. darkness, dark, night
narn
noun. a tale or a saga, that is told in verse to be spoken and not sung
nifredil
noun. a pale winter flower, snowdrop
nim-
adjective. pale, white
nimp
adjective. pale, white
oltha-
verb. to dream
pent
noun. tale
per-
prefix. half, divided in middle
per-
prefix. half
perin
adjective. half, divided in middle
rhîs
noun. queen
tad
cardinal. two
taur
noun. king (only used of the legitimate kings of whole tribes)
In LotR/IV:IV, Frodo is called Daur, which might be the mutated form of this word
tint
noun. spark
tinw
noun. spark, small star
tol-
verb. to come
tâd
cardinal. two
âr
noun. king (used of a lord or king of a specified region)
âr
noun. king
ôl
noun. dream
gwîn
adjective. young
A Noldorin name for ᴹQ. Túna appearing in Silmarillion drafts from the 1930s (LR/222), apparently a combination of Eledh “Elf” and the lenited form of its shorter name Tûn.