Dream of Gold and Green - Sindarin/Quenya

I tried to translate "Dream of Green and Gold" (gold as for the colour of the setting sun) to both Sindarin and Quenya.

Q. olor-laiqua-ar-laurë (I don't really know what could mean "of" here)

S. ôl-en-laeg-a-glawar

But sadly I know next to nothing of Elvish grammar and inflections, so I'm not sure how to put the words together, wether there is a more compound form... or wether I've used the right words at the first place...

So any help would be appreciated :)

Just so you're aware, laeg is specifically fresh leaf green, while calan is the more general word for green. I'm not sure which suits your intent better, but I offer:

ôl laeg a glórin (S. [leaf] green and gold dream)
ôl galan a glórin (S. green and gold dream)

Thank you!

Annon allen! (?)

The green here would refer to grass/foliage, so I think laeg will work, but thanks for the information, I didn't know the difference.

By the way, calan or calen?

Should be calen.

Also note a subtle nuance in meaning:

• ôl laeg a glórin / ôl ‘lórin a lhaeg “green and gold dream”.

• ôl laegas a glaur / ôl glaur a lhaegas “a dream of gold(ness) and green(ness)”.

Annon allen is correct :D

So in the first version they are adjectives, in the second nouns?

Correct. In the second they are nouns in an appositional genitive phrase.

That may be closer to what I've originally intended.

Thank you very much, Ellanto! Annon allen!

Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry for the typo! Yes, as Ellanto said, it should be calen.

No problem. I went to check it in the dictionary, and it was a good enough clue to make Eryn Lasgalen come into my mind.