Translate Linnyd into Sindarin?

A linnod (pl. linnyd) is a two line poem with 7 syllables per line.

These are little love poems to my wife, which I crafted so I can also use them as love poems from one book character to another, 'cause writing poetry is HARD.

I would love to see them translated into Sindarin.

Because I know this is a lot of work to ask, I'll transpose the Sindarin into the correct elven letters and make an illustration out of it. I'll send a hand-printed illustration to those who really help me with this.

I'm just really struggling with the syntax and grammar, it just doesn't want to stick in my head, and I need help.

PS - My personal fave is the last one.

---

The bonfire’s blaze shares no heat, Your smile enfolds and warms me.

---

Dawning sun sets sky afire, Your bright eyes set me alight.

---

Embers struggle to light fire, I burn with love at your touch.

---

Long-miles journey hews at me, The first smile from you heals all.

---

Lovers in my tales are mute, One thought of you and words flow.

---

I am going to attempt this but it may be a little bit.

I was hoping you would volunteer!

I have an oversized book illustration I carved and printed to reward you.

Here's a link to a super-duper-oversized print of the same design. (There are 3 photos in the link). The one I'll send is a 10"x18" inked area, not a 38"x96" one like the one hanging in my home.

www.instagram.com

And when the poems are done, I can use them to make a different illustration to also reward you with.

No need to wait until all of them are done …. :)

I have tried so hard to figure out the first line and I am stumped.

• Û vôr tôl o ruin e·naur, rae gín osta ah ora nin.

• No heat comes from the blaze of the fire, your smile surrounds and heats up me.

They are meant to be little love poems, created extemporaneously on the spot, from a bard to her husband, whom she adores.

So they don't have to be perfect, and in fact, the overflow of emotion in the moment isn't harmed by getting the rhyme a bit off.

Minuial gelia Ell, i-chend gail gin nartha nin.

mi-NUI-al GE-li-a ELL, e-CHEND GAIL GÍN NAR-tha NIN.

The Dawn illuminates the sky, Your bright eyes ignite me.

Ŷl dauglasser narthad naur, Ornon vo veleth echin.

ŶL daug-LAS-ser NAR-thad naur, OR-non vo VE-leth e-CHIN

Embers struggle to ignite a fire, I burn with love for you

• A ​​lhîdh and drava annin, e·rae o gin nesta il

• A LHÎDH AND DRA-va AN-nin, e-RAE o GIN NES-ta IL

• And a long journey hews at me, The smile from you heals all.

• Seryn dhîn vi e·drenern, sanol o chin, pith ribir

• SE-ryn DHÎN vi e-DREN-ern, PHITH RIB-ir vi NAUTH o CHIN

• Silent lovers in my tale, thinking about you, words flow [like a torrent].

Send me your address in a private message. I'm packing to leave for a month to go to some bookbinding/papermaking workshops, I'll send your prints the 2nd half of June when I get back.