Translate Linnyd into Sindarin?

david wendelken #4521

A linnod (pl. linnyd) is a two line poem with 7 syllables per line.

These are little love poems to my wife, which I crafted so I can also use them as love poems from one book character to another, 'cause writing poetry is HARD.

I would love to see them translated into Sindarin.

Because I know this is a lot of work to ask, I'll transpose the Sindarin into the correct elven letters and make an illustration out of it. I'll send a hand-printed illustration to those who really help me with this.

I'm just really struggling with the syntax and grammar, it just doesn't want to stick in my head, and I need help.

PS - My personal fave is the last one.


The bonfire’s blaze shares no heat, Your smile enfolds and warms me.


Dawning sun sets sky afire, Your bright eyes set me alight.


Embers struggle to light fire, I burn with love at your touch.


Long-miles journey hews at me, The first smile from you heals all.


Lovers in my tales are mute, One thought of you and words flow.


Rínor #4526

I am going to attempt this but it may be a little bit.

david wendelken #4527

I was hoping you would volunteer!

I have an oversized book illustration I carved and printed to reward you.

Here's a link to a super-duper-oversized print of the same design. (There are 3 photos in the link). The one I'll send is a 10"x18" inked area, not a 38"x96" one like the one hanging in my home.

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And when the poems are done, I can use them to make a different illustration to also reward you with.