Is this the correct translation in Quenya? New to all of this, haha.

I’m trying to translate a version of Sam’s line from Return of the King (“Is everything sad going to come untrue?” My version: “Everything sad came untrue”) into some form of Elvish for an tattoo and am struggling a bit. This is what I came up with, in Quenya, but I wanted some double-checks:

Ilya naira ola alenwa (Everything sad became not true)

Is this correct or a good enough approximation? Thanks!