Quenya for "Dancing Bane of Necks"?

david wendelken #2992

Is this appropriate? Intent is for a name for a two-handed axe that is very responsive to its wielder, with runes of fell import for evil creatures.

liltië aksindacil

Comments?

david wendelken #3083

Any comments? Thanks!

Ellanto #3086

There's no reason for axe to change to axi- in a compound, so axendacil "neck-slayer"; though I would rather offer axehyando "neck-cleaver".

As for "dancing", here you need an active participle, whereas you used a gerund; this may be confusing because in English both the active participle and the gerund take the same form ("dancing" in this case), but they are distinct in Quenya.

So "Dancing Neck-cleaver" would be Liltaila Axehyando.

david wendelken #3088

Thanks so much!