Hello all,
I am in the midst of trying to translate a phrase that has deep personal meaning to myself. During this process I have realized my gramatical skills are severely lacking. Could I ask anyone with better knowledge to help me with the translations in the parenthesis and bold.
Here is the saying in English for reference.
Loyalty from birth, Solitary by choice. Sight beyond vision, Clever and keen. In Creations weave, Protect this body. Gentle in mind, Patience to change. Wisdom to learn, Honesty to give. All guide this Soul.
And these are my translations thus far.
(Astar) va nosta, Eressëa cilmenen. Cen olor pella, Finya ar laica. I lanyassë Ëava, Varyanyë si hroa. Moica (indo), (Ahyacólema). (Saila parana), ( Óripanta anie) Illi asyalver si Fëa.