Would this be a good way to say "I am very tired"

Checking in to see if I'm doing this right, haha. Would this be a good way to write/say "I am very tired" in Quenya:

"Itlórenye?"

or would this be more appropriate:

"Íta nalórenye?"

I'd love to know why or why not, if anyone can help!

I'd say Ni amalumba "I (am) very weary," with intensive prefix am(a)- on the adjective lumba.