Gilruin
#2985
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There are a couple of grammatical problems still:
- The locative of talan would be talamessë, because it has a stem talam- and requires a connecting vowel. Also talan is glossed ‘flat space, platform’ after LotR was written (cp. the wood-elven flets), so it might not still mean ‘ground’ after that.
- The aorist form of har- is hare ‘stays’, its present ‘is staying’ is hára. The form hara does not exist for basic verbs.
- ‘there’ in this sentence is a specific artefact of English grammar, it might not be the most natural way to express this in Quenya.
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