These are the comments on Nimlothiel's contribution “Silmesse - in starlight”.
Written by Helge.K.Fauskanger, ‘Silmesse’ is a poem in quenya. It also features in the album ‘In Elven Lands’ by The Fellowship.
Here I sit in the pale starlight; from Ilmen, sparks are shining into the night. They see me, the silvery eyes, as they saw the wakening Elves. The heavenly jewels give me joy. I praise them in the fairest songs. The starlight is forever new. I watch them now as the first Elf did, as the first awakened who saw the light of a star.
Quenya Neologism
Thank you for your contribution! But unfortunately, your contribution was rejected by Aldaleon. Reason:
This is a beautiful and very well written poem, but a lot has changed since he published it, and e has changed his own interpretation of Quenya as well. Therefore, it is better not to publish this (though I appreciate the effort you put into this), and focus on his New Testament instead.
You are welcome to adapt your submission and submit it for review again.
Hi Elrandir,
Thank you for your contributions. I have not had a chance to process them yet as I have recently moved to another country, and is still settling in. I will let you know as soon as I can give these contributes the attention they deserve.
Thanks,
Aldaleon
Hi! Sorry I only just noticed this comment, so please do not think me rude for not replying! Do not worry, take as long as you need! Also, although by now you probably already have, i hope you settle in well and enjoy your time there! Regards, Nimlothiel/Elrandir