Proposal to my Girlfriend, would like to ask for a translation

Cybertron9996 #1114

Good morning mates,

as time goes by, i recently made the desicion to prpose to my girlfriend. She has a passion for music and lord of the rings. Whith the proposel, id like to hand her, some lines and sentences, which really matter to her, and which i collected over the years.

I know, for the fist post, its not quite nice to ask for such a thing in this forum. But this really matters to me and id like to ask kindly if there is some expert who could translate this.

If these were the last beats Of your heart dance to them. Look inside your heart And get through the night Feel the thunder rise inside It's time for the fire to reignite. You´ve got the thunder running through your veins It feels like a hurricane.

StarGift #1116

I like your style. Why aren't all guys like this? You obviously love her. I will do my best to help you but I can't promise anything.

Cybertron9996 #1119

I really appriciate your help, and thank you, that youll try to translate those sentances. This means a lot to me!

Elaran #1127

@StarGift: Do you realise that your "translation" had the English word "gerund" in it? It had many other problems as well, like mixing Quenya and Sindarin words, as well as some unrecognisable stuff, without any grammar. Hence I had to remove it, as well as your problematic source. I do not wish to affect your enthusiasm, but please do not reply to requests unless you are certain that you can offer proper ones. The community would be happy to help you with getting better at things.

Edit: To clarify what happened for others, I did not remove the comments but edited them by replacing problematic bits [like this], the user themselves seem to have removed their comments.